bitter (daily post – tanka)

her lips puckered,
the old neighbour stared with hope –
sucking a lemon
bitterly disappointed
the old man slammed the front door

©Tournesol’17/05/09

2 thoughts on “bitter (daily post – tanka)”

janicead says:

11 May 2017 at 1:28 am

Gene and I just had a little dust up and he left the room.

LikeLike

Reply
1. Tournesol says:
  
  11 May 2017 at 5:42 am
  
  🙂
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply

Enter your comment here...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

Email (Address never made public)

Name

Website

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change )

You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change )

You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change )

You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: