doux baiser (haiku)

ce doux baiser
aile de papillon soyeuse
joue effleurer

that gentle kiss
butterfly’s silken wings
brushed his cheek

© Tournesol ’15

Carpe Diem Writing Techniques: metaphor

13 thoughts on “doux baiser (haiku)

    1. I have always spoken it but never went to French school, and wish I could write it better. When I write it in French first, it’s the original thought I had in that language. And, thanks so much for your kind words.

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