Courting moon (Troiku)

© Clr '15

(Troiku)

I stood in awe
watched a work of art
angels created

I stood in awe
only eyes can admire
an artist paint

watched a work of art
pictured brush strokes in the sky
I stood in awe

angels created
arched moon woos
sparkly stars

© Tournesol ’15

TROIKU, is a new form of haiku (an abstract of one of the Carpe Diem Previews) created by Chèvrefeuille.

4 Replies to “Courting moon (Troiku)”

  1. Wonderful, and very atmospheric. I have never heard of this from, but feel I would like it a lot, I written something a bit similar with 15 interrelated variations on a sculpture by Giacometti. I enjoy bouncing off music, other writing and various types of art including photography. I Love this and will look for others, best wishes and blessings, Charles.

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    1. thank you so much…I am searching for “music” to write a ballad right now…but when I punched Quebec ballads, I discovered Ike Quebec…so I’ll enjoy this for now:) I will check your blog at my break later. Thanks again for your kind words, Charles

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